One of my favorite poets here on WordPress and I collaborated together on a poem. It was an honor to work with him. Jared deserves most of the credit for this poem as he so graciously helped me with a few of my lines. Thanks, Winchester. It was truly an honor & I had fun working with you. ❤
What was absent,
what was a duress?
Ask a mirror what
you must address.
You say see vain a
pain of my conflict
I ask of you mirror
what in contradicts?
I’ve seen heaven,
I have seen a hell;
where in between
chaos does dwell.
Is this all there is
chaos and pain
between hell’s fire
and heaven’s gate?
Envisioned pillars
rise such structure
that reflects within;
defined is obscure.
I shall discover my
truth grim to real
the path to gates a
heart it will reveal.
A profound poem
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Thank you, Sadje!! ❤
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You’re welcome Kristian
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the entire poem is outstanding but these lines really hit home for me…….
“I’ve seen heaven,
I have seen a hell;
where in between
chaos does dwell.”
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Yes. Those are Jared’s lines. His poetry is phenomenal. Hes amazing at inflicting deep emotions!
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the entire poem is amazing……just something about those words hit hard.
Thank you for sharing, you guys did a great job!
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Thank you!
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Wow just wow Kristian!!! 🥰 You did an amazing collab with Jared! You pierced through minds and hearts simultaneously…… Congratulations dear Kristian and Jared! ❤️💚🧡💛💜💙💜💛🧡💚❤️
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Thank you so much, Yeka! Jared is phenomenal! It was an honor to work with him!! ❤ ❤
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Omg! Beautiful! I love collabs and you killed this!!
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Thank you! We had a lot of fun working on it together. I love collabs too! Especially with my favorite poets, and speaking of favorite poets….. *cough, cough* Would you be interested in doing a collab with me?
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