Watching the lightning and listening to the thunder,
reading your words before I drift off to slumber.
My dreams take me away to foreign lands
my feet haven’t walked here, yet I know where I stand.
I hear your voice call me, all deep and sweet,
although I’ve not heard it, it drives my heart beat.
You call out my name, and I turn in an instant.
It feels so real, but reality is distant.
Always the same, you, me and the willow tree.
You look at me in wonder, like I’m all that you see.
We sit on the bench and stare out at the lake
I look in your eyes and my hand you do take.
I’ve been here before, I’ve felt your presence.
How could I ever forget such a sweet, tender essence?
In an ideal world I’d know the comfort of your arms,
knowing that with you, my heart would be shielded from harm.
But the world’s not ideal, and you don’t even see me,
so I’ll dream that you do, beneath the willow tree.
Kristian L. Weigman
A beautiful, tender poem
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Thank you, Sadje!!
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You’re welcome Kristian
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Mmmm I love the ending. The willow tree… Love that.
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Thanks. I’m glad you enjoyed it!! I’m hoping to get part 3 published soon!!
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Crap. I just realized I posted this comment on the wrong post. Lol. I’m so brain dead this week. Thanks just the same though!! 😁😁
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A marvelously expressed poem Kristian 🙂
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Well gee, Rory! Your lovely comments are making the perfect start to my vacation!! Thank you so much, friend!! 😁
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Well, l just say it how it is Kristian – it was a lovely read 🙂
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I appreciate it!
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Pleasure as always and it’s never a problem – have a great vacation! anywhere special or just staying at home to chill?
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Baltimore. The big city in Maryland. Lol. It’s about a 3 1/2 hour drive, but we’re visiting family & catching an Orioles game!!! 😁😁 Stay tuned for pictures!!!
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Orioles? Is that those chocolate cookies? I didn’t know they had games with cookies??
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Bahaha!! It’s so funny you mention that. Baltimore has a very distinct accent & when the pronounce it, it sounds like Balmer Oweos!” 😂😂 Baseball, just in case you’re not on the up in up on American sports. Maryland’s state bird is the Oriole.
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Ha ha Baseball cookies then, interesting …. 🙂
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Lol!!
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Reblogged this on A Guy Called Bloke and K9 Doodlepip! and commented:
But the world’s not ideal, and you don’t even see me,
so I’ll dream that you do, beneath the willow tree.
Kristian L. Weigman
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You rock, Rory!! Thank you!!
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Pleasure Kristian 🙂
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Beautiful! Your writing is exquisite!
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Thank you so much for your lovely words! I greatly appreciate the compliment and you taking the time to read it! 🙂
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Beautiful! ❤
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Thank you so much!!
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Wow! This is great. I love this
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Thank you so much!
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Wow!!!❤
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Thank you!!
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My pleasure!
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