I wrote this poem last year, but it seems fitting for today. I should have used this one as my pandemic poem, the world needs more altruism.
Love & life lessons,
Kristian
The world has told me that I “care too much,”
but I’m learning that there’s no such thing.
I’ve listened to the trees, and the waters,
and the dirt of the earth,
and they all wish more people “cared too much,”
I have watched my father cling to my mother’s dying body.
I watched as he took her face in his hands,
and kissed her lips before her final breath escaped her tired lungs.
And I thought to myself how lucky she was,
to have someone who “cared too much.”
I have seen death, and murder, and suicide.
The world has hardened those people,
the same ones who say I “care too much.”
But I don’t have to listen.
The world is as soft, and kind, and sweet as I see it,
and I’ll be damned if I let anyone steer me away from my heart.
I have witnessed the homeless sleeping in cardboard boxes,
and the people as they pass by, thankful for the roof’s over their heads.
And I felt pity for those passers,
who are too foolish to see the human spirit inside that box.
Yes, there is no such thing as caring too much.
Well said!
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Thank you. I think this is my favorite poem of all the ones I’ve written.
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I will agree with you! It’s written beautifully and from the heart! Great all around!
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Thank you!!
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You’re welcome!
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A beautiful poem about generosity of love.
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Thank you!!
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A pleasure.
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Kristina, this is such an amazing and loving piece. You have a heart of gold beating within you. 💛
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Aww. Thank you so much!!
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😍
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Agree!!
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👊
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A beautiful poem my friend. I agree, there is no such thing as caring too much.
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Thank you!! I appreciate the lovely comment. The world needs more people who care. 🤗
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Great poem and great sentiment.
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Thank you!!
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this is such an incredible poem!
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Thank you so much!!
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my pleasure……
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Amen to that!
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This was a beautiful piece of writing. Quite moving!
Read my first blog post on why I believe caring too much about what people think will destroy your life…
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Thank you!!
I will check that out.
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That was absolutely stunning in every way. Simply. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much!! ❤
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Gorgeous piece! ❤
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Thank you so much!! ❤
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What a profound message Kristian. Never be dissuaded from carrying too much.
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Thank you, Sadje! ❤
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You’re welcome 😊
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So beautifully expressed – yes the world needs more caring people, not less. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
Just a side note to add to things we have in common. My mother was the first of my parents to die. They’d been married 43 years at the time of her death and the example of loving care my Dad displayed will stay with me until, at last, my own time comes to leave this world. It is a treasured memory.
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This is getting freaky. My parents were married for 45 years. My dad was so good with my mom, their love will always stay with me too. They were the epitome of a strong marriage.
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And cue the theme song for Twilight Zone haha
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Bahaha!! For real, though!
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LOL
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And thank you for the lovely comment. ❤
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My sincere pleasure. 🙂
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